Death in a Poem, by a.m.b.e.r Subscribe to rss feed for a.m.b.e.r

                   roses  are red,
                   violets are blue,
                   lay me down in the 
                   field next to you.

                   tears are now plenty,
                   and there's a lot of "so longs",
                   but how we've gotten here
                    is so very wrong.

                   the days are hot and 
                   the nights are very cold,
                    but now we're gone
                   and our story has been told
Posted: 2009-05-02 11:32:05 UTC

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2009-05-16 18:13:55Your Everlasting
This poem is so...well there's no word for it.Poetic,but it is more than that.I WONDER IF THERE IS A WORD FOR IT A BEAUTIFUL PERFECT WORD.

2009-05-23 21:54:35Teresa
WOW!!! this poem is amazing simple but means so so so very much!! keep up the amazing work

2009-06-03 16:31:50KayDe$
This is great work. I agree that it is simple yet heart-felt. This is a perfect poem. Keep it up,amber:]

2009-10-27 20:04:37~Angela~
i love this poem!