The Sidewalk of Life and Love, by SenSeLeSS Subscribe to rss feed for SenSeLeSS

It was late and dark
It was raining and cold
She was lonely
She was sad
He was heartbroken
He was alone
They finally met
On the walk home
They were both on the same side of the sidewalk
Life's sidewalk
Love's sidewalk
Once his eyes met hers
She walked closer to him
Tilted head and crossed arms
She glared at him
He returned her stares
They both knew each other's story
It had been the same one
They had no one to hold their hands
No one to walk beside them
Their hearts had been broken 
That same night
They had given up on love
Sworn never to love again
Until she stared into his deep blue eyes
Until he brushed her midnight hair with his hands
Until they held hands
And walked back home
Together
On the opposite side of the sidewalk
Posted: 2005-01-09 03:38:48 UTC

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2005-03-28 02:28:16lacebutterflies
I like how your poem tells a story.It's really good.

2005-05-07 16:50:52wishing_on_stars
I like it. It brings hope to people that there will always be a new beginning.

2005-12-04 15:29:07Spiritual Beauty
it's nice how u put it.. how the 'meant to be' interferes with our choices

2005-12-13 09:13:09Crzy Angelchic
whoa...i like it somehow. its weird...and sweet. and beautifully written...but weird. good job

2006-08-28 22:03:36.:side:walk:.
Not only do I liekt he title ( which mentions my user name, hehe) but the poem is so strong with amazing words

2006-12-09 01:21:22*Psychopathic Child*
i really like this

2006-12-28 19:06:08Just Eat My Heart Out
i really dont like it much, but i lov your stories... stick to stories

2007-03-03 03:37:15liberty moon
wow this really was wot i needed. u gave me hope at a time when i was giving up on love.

2007-08-04 14:02:07User
An great poem..I enjoy reading it so much.. ^_^

2008-05-16 03:18:52Nora Eason
I like it, it left me wanting to hear more.

2009-07-23 15:54:50Disruptive Silence
AMAZING! :)

2009-10-11 18:46:53raven
i love it. it's so touching it makes me cry. literally!

2010-03-21 22:24:06baya
hmmm interesting . . . very interesting. Two broken hearts make whole you know.