Beauty Of Our Innocence , by Felicia
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I strained my eyes to look, to see
A figure emerging form the snow dusted street
Clasping hands we walked together
The wind was piercing cold
Bringing our bond closer than before
We swung our arms
Our movement was magical
Sparkling in the falling snow
I felt strong and fearless
In your strong embrace
Nothing could bring me down
I inhale the frosty air,feeling it enter my lungs
Your warm touch comforting me
The feeling of ecstasy running through our lips
Our energy becoming one as you trace my neck
Your sweet breath whispering in my ear
Your eyes hold mine
Passion flowing through
Showing the beauty of our innocence
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| Posted: 2009-03-13 03:18:52 UTC |
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| 2009-03-13 03:13:59 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| yes this is a very good poem i like the feel it gives plus the detail and vocabulary used in this...you did a fantastic job and thank you for your previous comments..and yes the darkness of my more recent poems reflects the darkness upon my life...but once again great job! |
| 2009-03-13 11:53:12 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| wow thank you very much for your previous comment and yes i hope i do become famous in poetry one day and can get a book out there soon and if i do i will notify you :).....anyways thank you for showing me such appreciation about my poems...and by the way you are a very good writer yourself so do not think for a second you wont make it some where....Tyler |
| 2009-03-13 16:46:19 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| also if you ever get the chance i would like your opinion upon two specific poems(A Message to the One I love / The Unknown Cyclone) i would like to know what you think about those two...also any of the ones i wrote today if you would like to take a look...and remember if you ever need help on starting on writing on a certain topic just let me know.....Tyler |
| 2009-03-18 01:48:04 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| hope whenever you get back you get to view my new poems! especially (Your Mistake, My Problem) that I wrote I'm positive you'll like it. hope your safe and get back soon!....Tyler |