Blue Flame, by Acushla Subscribe to rss feed for Acushla

panic sets in, im hallucinating
eyes run wild, heart's accelerating
i look for you but i cant see
you locked your heart and took the key
now i wait in the cold behind the door
hoping, waiting you'll come back for more
its pathetic, i know, but pity me i plead
on the outside im fine but internally i bleed
its possible to die more times than just one
i've done it, gone months, even years without sun
the night was my home, evil my friend
pain was eternal, one beginning and no end
but i saw a flame in the distant dark
your heart shone bright though a tiny spark
light. i lived, for a moment or two
as i ran towards a love i knew
but as i moved closer, the flame turned blue
i called your name, without a clue
that the person who was locking the door
wasnt waiting for me anymore.
Posted: 2009-02-15 22:47:09 UTC

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2009-02-20 15:22:52Tyler Cedric Golden
a very spectacular poem by the expression, vocabularly, and just the overall way it was wrote and if you like poems that show descriptiveness and evil then i recommend the consideration of you reading my poem (Concept of Hell) and let me know what you think because i am very persistent on gaining opinions about it....but very nice poem indeed...(and i had to vote this a nine,...spectacular)

2009-03-03 19:00:21sweetNsour
Its very vivid- It creates a sad mood that i could feel in every line. Its well done i love it.

2009-04-30 20:21:13!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
WELL WRITTEN!!