Standing In The Rain, by LostSoul Subscribe to rss feed for LostSoul

I'm standing in the rain
Awhile, soaking all the pain
Tears keep falling from the sky
And nothing's left inside

But pieces of my heart
Breaking in and out
I should've known it from the start
That you would leave me out

I should've known from the very first kiss
And the very last diss
When you said you didn't love me
How could you when you left me?

Alone
No one to blame
But my own
I should've known

I'm standing in the rain
Awhile, soaking all the pain
Tears keep falling from the sky
And nothing's left inside

So many times I tried
To talk
But all you do is walk
Why don't you walk your talk
So many broken promises you promised
Just another talk
Of neverending promises
That was broken and missed

Like starting a family you and I
We could've been set
Flown around the world on a jet
Just another broken promise of how we met

Now my tears won't end
My heart won't mend
Angels please send
Take me to another place
Where my heart is safe
Take me away from my destination
And show me my salvation
From devastation
Take me and make me another creation

I'm standing in the rain
Awhile, soaking all the pain
Tears keep falling from the sky
And nothing's left inside
Posted: 2009-02-03 05:21:30 UTC

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2009-02-08 03:45:09Azure Faye
This was SO GOOD!! i ♥'d it!!!

2009-02-11 06:48:09LostSoul
Thank you Azure Faye

2009-02-12 22:18:36Azure Faye
Your welcome! i just read it again and its SO GOOD!!!!

2009-02-13 14:11:23Chalan
I really liked this. You can feel the bitterness and the pain behind your words. Good job.

2009-02-14 00:22:20LostSoul
Thank you Chalan.

2009-02-18 20:05:17ray!
"Tears keep falling from the sky And nothing's left inside" my fave part, I love it!!

2009-02-19 08:05:01LostSoul
Thank you very much ray!

2009-03-01 14:45:48izzy
This is SO GREAT! every stanza is perfect in showing the true emotion and pain. GREAT JOB!!

2009-03-08 01:25:25Kimberly
very nive.Love it !