Land of the Free, by Simply-Me-20104 Subscribe to rss feed for Simply-Me-20104

  Just think how 
Your life would be
  If it weren't for our 
Country's history
  All of the struggles 
That we've surpassed
  And the American 
Pride that lasts
  The many freedoms 
That we share
  Thanks to those 
Who said "I dare"
  Who took the 
Challenge, and won
  Just like president 
Abraham Lincoln 
  An underdog,
He started out young
  Not many supporters
Yet he got the job done
  Took on a burden
With tension rising
  North against South
No more compromising
  An ultimatum,
Comply, or war
  "A quick victory"
Each had swore
  Four years of fighting
And all slaves were free
  Think how that made
Life for you and me        
  Can't understand
The pain they endured
  But now their life
And liberty was ensured
  Thanks to Lincoln 
Our country could now be
  America,
The land of the free
  
                  Chelsea Czapla   12-18-2008 6:52pm
**School project**
Posted: 2008-12-28 04:48:33 UTC

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2008-12-26 05:13:44!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
the fight for whats right may seem crazy or impossible to most but if those who believe fight. they shall always prevail and over come death with true life. I thank you for your poetry it is really inspiring

2009-02-06 03:14:15sweetNsour
i am not an american but i enjoyed your poem

2009-02-12 17:17:33Tyler Cedric Golden
Hmmm I like the way you write and express your feelings in such an accomplishing and optimistic way. You did very good on the vocabulary and the rhyming too.Well done.

2009-04-08 23:48:58Natural_beauty_Ashe
this is very well written and i love how its expressive to our countrys history.:)