I still remember, by LostSoul Subscribe to rss feed for LostSoul

Today is just another day.
Time has passed and you are still away.
I'm feelin' a little better
Even if only for a little.

I still think about you everyday
Even though I try to make the pain go away.

I still remember your smell.
I still remember your kiss.
I still remember your voice.
I still reminisce...

Why don't you care?
Why did you leave?
How could you dare?

I still remember your smell.
I still remember your kiss.
I still remember your voice.
I still reminisce...
Posted: 2008-12-17 05:13:24 UTC

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2008-12-18 16:20:15Tyler Cedric Golden
hmmm....interesting i dont see why you didnt make it longer with a little more detail...dont get me wrong it is a good poem but i think you could do more to it because you are a very talented writer.....good poem though.... :0

2008-12-19 01:39:09LostSoul
Thank you for the comment. Yes, I also believe it is an incomplete work. Just one of those writers block, but I needed to write so I wrote what I could.

2009-10-25 23:25:35Hannah George
This is really awesome, and filled with passion.

2009-11-24 17:31:59Edward S Bumgarner
Sad...

2010-01-04 13:42:26Convalescence
Beautifuly sad.. It's how life goes. I like the poem