Who I Am, by Rachel
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How do you expect me to be who i am
If you never give me the chance
I would grip the shield really tight
If you you would just give me the lance
I would love to dance for everyone
If you would just give me the tune
I would love to be who i will be
So please let me go soon
I want to do something spectacular
I need a push to do something great
So tell me to do it, and quick please
Before it becomes too late
I tired of sitting with everyone else
who does not care for my plan
yet i cannot give up what i see in myself
I cannot give up who i am |
| Posted: 2005-04-09 02:37:34 UTC |
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| 2005-04-09 19:52:40 | Cpick |
| very nice reflection of emotion. Wonderful statement of who you are as well. Props! |
| 2005-04-14 02:54:46 | Annie |
| Wow I really like this. I can see my self in it. This is good work. Maybe you can put some of your work into my book? lol but thanks for the comment on mine...wish things were going well in the real world with the stuff i write about...but umm...keep up the good work!?! |
| 2005-05-29 00:38:22 | wishing_on_stars |
| This is like so real. I feel exactly the same way. It's a great piece. |