My heart is torn, by Eclipse of the Moon Subscribe to rss feed for Eclipse of the Moon

My heart is torn.

Cut so deep,

that not even

caring words can reach.

my soul is broken,

with words that were spoken.

That I never knew,

until tonight.

You promised to never leave me.

You promised to never hurt me again.

Yet what have you done?

You've gone back on your word,

so many times.

That I don't believe you anymore.

You say you love me,

Yea, I'm sure thats true.

You don't care,

you've strung me along,

for so long.

I gave you my heart,

yet you just

completely tore it apart.

I gave you all my love,

forever and always.

I hate what you've done!

I hate that you're so immature.

you told someone,

that you didn't want to be

married to me.

Yet you said,

you didn't want to hurt me.

HA! you've strung me along,

like a damned rag doll.

I'm going to move on.

I don't care anymore.

You broke my heart,

when the love I give is true.

I will love you forever more,

but I'm going to move on.
Posted: 2008-05-08 03:06:00 UTC

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2008-05-22 14:18:22ray!
good for you!

2008-06-29 00:13:22Katelyn7
This was really good and powerful! nice ending!

2009-05-19 21:39:51...
Wow! This is great, really powerful, I love the similie you've used: "you've strung me along, like a damned rag doll" Makes the poem so powerful and honest! It's great!