Uneasy suggestions, by Sally Rose
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Why can't life
be colored with every good?
never ever cost a thing?
always treat us as it should?
Why can't life
never be profane?
turning us into dirty names?
making us become what we despise and shame?
What does life
sneak around our backs?
think to give us heart attacks?
shrivle us to old and grey?
Why is life
cold and mean to the highest degree?
simply revealing with no feeling?
a disortation of mistakes and regreats we make?
Why is life
not what we make it,but what it makes us?
We can change right?
We have our Whole lives?
~Sally Rose |
| Posted: 2005-03-29 22:23:20 UTC |
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| 2005-04-25 19:14:34 | abs |
| intresing subject matter fantasically written this poem is fab! |
| 2007-02-15 10:33:56 | liberty moon |
| i think i have an answer to this difficult question, we live in a broken world God never intended for life to be the way it is. yes we live in this all we can do is fight for the life we want and ask God to help us achieve it, this is a gr8 poem |
| 2008-01-12 04:04:50 | |
| Deep. I think it talks about things that people try to ignore. |