Encounter in Eden, by Chuck Shorter
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WHILST SERPENTINE SATAN SIPS
EVE'S EAGER ENCHANTING LIPS
DOTH BLIND ADAM ARDENTLY AWAIT
THE TENDER TOUCH OF HIS MATE
FRESH FORBIDDEN FRUIT FOR ADAM
PRE-BITTEN BY BEAUTIFUL MADAM
TEMPTED TO TASTE IT HE ATE
SO SURELY SEALING HIS FATE
AND ADAM ADMITTED SADLY
THAT HIS LADY LOVED LUCIFER MADLY
THUS ENDETH THIS ROMANTIC TALE
OF ADAM,EVE AND A "DEVILISH" MALE
CHUCK SHORTER
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| Posted: 2007-05-10 17:47:01 UTC |
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| 2007-06-22 14:49:37 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| Short,sweet and to the point! a subject that has been ripped,torn, and researched since that fateful day! very well written with a hint of devilsh seeping through it's text/content. :)glostarg |
| 2008-01-19 06:25:58 | Sheila |
| Very well put! |
| 2010-01-04 19:33:51 | Angel of Music |
| Chuck, Hello friend! Once again I must say how much I enjoyed this poem! you truly are a wonderful writer! I have some new poetry that I would love for you to read and comment on. "Close to my Heart" and "Treasured Moments". Looking forward to hearing from you again. *~*The Angel of Music*~*Amanda*~* |