Dear Diary, by Forbidden Heart
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Wake up.
Go to school.
Home.
Bed.
What do you have to do when it all past,
does a diary care to make it last.
It is not that I want to make it long,
I just can't do enough to make a song.
Will there be better ways to make a five.
so that we all can have a better life.
Wake up.
Go,
to school
Home
Bed....... |
| Posted: 2007-03-10 18:11:28 UTC |
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| 2007-03-26 16:16:22 | Tim Pozzi |
| interesting format |
| 2007-04-10 04:20:08 | Chalan |
| I thought that there was a uniqueness to this piece of work. Well done! |
| 2007-05-18 01:10:21 | Angel of Music |
| Interesting and very good I loved it! :) |
| 2009-01-13 17:39:48 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| very interesting way of writing but i do like it very much....fantastic job... |