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censored security
deprived liberty
and degraded sensiblity
embed a sense of morality
and then you have shelter
shelter from all that is sane, rational, or real
and there there we find him
slouched
waiting 
watching
waiting
one day the walls will fall down
Posted: 2006-08-13 04:17:25 UTC

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2006-08-13 04:28:45Loneliness is condescending
neeeeh its good but i'm not sure i'm super into it somethings missing

2006-08-13 04:30:42lost the lonely dead
i rushed it but ill run it by you another time when i mutilate it some more

2006-08-29 19:19:44Faith
Interesting... i like the way you did this.

2006-09-08 04:57:27lost the lonely dead
well its kinda short i wanna embellish it some maybe give it more....meat somehow its a good start i suppose thanks for the comments