Kissing my best friend, by Loneliness is condescending
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Two souls entwined
Reflections with out a mirror
Opposites of heart and soul
Silent whispers and passing glances
Stories never spoken
Break away from others
Seeking time together
A race with out an ending
Our happiness is shattered
With a scream the world is turned upside down
A lifetime flashes before my eyes
All it is, is you
Crawling out to safety in an unforgiving world
Your hand clutched so tight in mine
With nothing making since
I steal a kiss from you
And fear it settles in
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| Posted: 2006-05-10 21:41:35 UTC |
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| 2006-05-11 14:18:25 | lost the lonely dead |
| the last line: well duh i mean its a good poem but if the things in it line up the way i think they might you just should stop the whole charade...there are some things which shouldnt be messed with and your not playing with matches anymore.... |
| 2006-05-14 08:05:41 | lost the lonely dead |
| nevermind then....i guess we must conclude henceforth i am crazy and but this is an odd thing to write unless it has some merit but it is good...i do like the mood of it, the last line is killer good for the topic of the poem, makes me almost feel pain as it brings a sense of ending or a conclusion like the 'love' in the writing must be only temporary its good but also sad enough you dont want to really read it again but you konw you will, make any sense? i doubt it could coming from me *thumbs up* |
| 2006-05-24 14:17:48 | lost the lonely dead |
| *laughs* ok well if all my theories were wrong......."sweet sensations" THIS IS A BEAUTIFULLY MURDEROUS POEM! rock on! (dunno why but it all hit me in the middle of the night so it must be true) *grin* |