Bored Monkey, by Loneliness is condescending
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Bored monkeys ate my brain and now I cant breath because
I’m swimming and as fate would have it I’m not a fish
and the bowling balls around my ankles are pulling me deeper
and I think that frog sitting on my chain is mocking me and
alas I'm all wet and this water is bleeding the red all out
of me
This is just something I wrote that makes since to pretty
much only the people who know me and I don’t plan that
anyone here will really get this or like it |
| Posted: 2006-04-06 03:03:27 UTC |
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| 2006-04-06 14:21:09 | lost the lonely dead |
| uh *laughs* I LOVE IT *chuckles* thats ok like half the stuff i post i know will probably never be commented on but thats ok, but actually this writing you have here isnt bad at all and i could see it growing |
| 2006-04-22 03:16:19 | Natalie |
| Hehehe I LOVE IT TOO!!! I love this type of poetry (does it have a genre??)......dont get me wrong, i love sad, emo poetry about death and hate....but it can get abit to much.lol.
I love the idea and the way in which you wrote it. Infact. I like every thing about it. Welldone :) |
| 2007-03-03 05:07:53 | sk8t3R gal 4 eva |
| OMG!!! i loved it!!! it sorta like sayin that iguanas like jalapeno waffles!! |