Broken, by Loneliness is condescending Subscribe to rss feed for Loneliness is condescending

Falling hard into the corner 
I've been left behind striped of my honor 
From this place of safety I gaze after them 
Ripping the petals of white from the stem 
Went to far this time 
Condemning me for my silent crime 
When did my eyes go blind? 
Why did I let go of you my friend? 
What happened to friends till the end?
I've lost all my courage, unable to go on 
Looking for the promised dawn 
Your voice is haunting me 
Strew about the derbies 
This is all that's left of my life 
Can't bring myself to use this knife 
There in the distance is a ray of hope 
Will it reach me in time, Can I learn to cope 
Anger fills my heart I will not go out like you 
Standing tall, Breathing deep, I will see this through 
The dead cannot forgive 
Is there still time to live? 
Posted: 2005-02-24 06:16:22 UTC

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2005-02-27 16:33:01My_pain_your_thrill
This is an excellent peice of writing, it makes me think of my cousin's suicide..I like it!

2006-05-14 08:14:07lost the lonely dead
its a holy sacred beautiful priceless piece one of your top five i would say and i like how it feels so real....and well you know there are two of us who dont condemn we just want you to be with us through this (i think i could say that of our friend with a certain measure of confidence) and if you dont believe in love at least you seem to believe in *hug* if nothing more live for my sake im living for yours (i think) and the few people i believe might care...even if im wrong, and if i say it a thousand times ill say it again i love your poems