once upon a nitemare, by *ANGELofDARKNESS*
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Once upon a nitemare
He started in my dreams
Then moved out into my life
I thought it wasn’t that bad
But then I started to feel it
Deep within me
The pain that he so longed for
I could feel his thrust inside my chest
And feel the anger in my face
As time went on it got worse
I slowly started losing faith
I thought no one would find me
Locked in my own prison
Deep within my thoughtful cell
He takes me life, my will, my way
As long I have my…
Wait I can’t say that
He has stolen everything I'm worth
He keeps my soul trapped deep inside
That hour glass that slowly counts
Down the days of my dreadful life
No one seems to notice I'm gone
I've bee trapped in this hell for about a year
I guess they must have given up
For I have heard no tears
The cries I make to all of you
Must not be strong enuff
So once upon a nitemare
Please remember this
If you hear my cries at nite
Now that I'm almost free
From this death that surrounds me
And I’ll be there soon
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Posted: 2005-01-27 02:58:34 UTC |
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2005-05-08 01:48:59 | angie |
thats really awsem |
2005-06-19 07:10:35 | Lost~N~lonely |
thats good. But in the line must not be stong enuff some people might get confuzed but i know you meant enough |
2005-06-25 16:21:15 | Cutebunnywithfangz |
I lkie the intensidy of the poem. The hate for this nightmare is all over the poem. It really catches my eye. Great work *ANGELofDARKNESS*. |
2005-11-04 18:03:36 | XxDeathXWishxX |
this is one of your best ones that actually relates to real life shit that happends because believe it or not we all have been there.
love kendra |
2006-08-31 05:50:20 | cute bunny |
what a unique poem.... |
2007-06-20 14:01:41 | destiny_light |
wow that was such a great poem...i feel your pain |
2008-01-02 08:18:13 | BurnsLikeAThousandScars♥ |
this poem makes absolutely no sense whatsoever I love it all you can figure out is that some dickhead has trapped you lol |
2008-01-18 00:42:36 | Skin~Essays |
kewl poem... hi i'm new here.. |
2008-07-17 20:15:07 | Teresa |
i dont agree with tashii i understood it i felt the same way for awhile there anyway great work i lover it
--Teresa |
2008-08-30 02:14:40 | moshqueen |
I felt this once too. It sucks monkey nuts when you're in it, but the light shines through and things get better. |
2009-03-14 23:38:10 | Gutta Chic |
I loved it its so amazing i totaly relate to it keep up the gud work |
2010-03-11 15:30:26 | Convalescence |
Good poem, slightly depresso on espresso, but I'm lovin it. It's great. Keep up the good work. |